One night my uncle max went to the store to buy some snacks because my brother and I were staying with him for a few days during the summer. When he got out of the car he saw a man running away from two chubby cops so he chased the thief down and took him to the cops and he returned the money from the store back to the owner and we left.
One saturday morning my whole family decided to go to Santa Cruz. So we all gathered up a my grandmothers house and my we followed each other to Santa Cruz when we got there my brother and I met up with my uncle max and we went on all the the rides while the rest of the family was swimming on the beach. When we were finished with the rides we met up with everyone else and my uncle max starts sprinting towards the water and jumps in with all his clothes and a few minutes later he comes out with a little boy who is only 6 years old. A few hours later we found the boys parents and the boy was safe.
It's really nice to hear when a guy has somebody other than their parents to look up to, and in this case it was your uncle. I like how all three of your stories came out having one specific way that you view your uncle Max as. I can see in your eyes that he is very heroic and would put his life on the line to save those he doesn't even know, even though he may not get the thanks he deserves.
ReplyDeleteYour uncle is a stud. He's like a superhero right out of a comic book. He takes the initiative to go out of his way to do the right thing even when people are rude to him. He really is a role model to look up to.
ReplyDeleteYour uncle sounds so awesome. He sounds like a really independent person who helps anyone in need. He seems to put others before himself, and that is a very admirable trait. Very good job.
ReplyDeleteTotal superhero. I hope you develop these stories into a fully realized final draft, with dialogue and tons of concrete sensory details (what did it smell like at the boardwalk? what did you hear? what was the weather like? was it daylight or dark?).
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